Hi Vincent. As we discussed earlier this week, I don't find your first (2) images all that successful. However the those are. The blue color is so beautiful and captivating in that one image you posted. As you process that image in particular be sure that the symmetry is "Spot On" as they say in England! It's so close as it is right now, but not perfect. For me your fourth image from the top is a better B&W photo and the last image needs more processing, as it just feel a bit dead or lack-luster, but it has something to work with, so don't give up on it, just experiment with how you are processing it. I would start with more contrast, a bit brighter and adjusting the clarity/texture. Good Luck!
Hi Vincent, also adjust the orientation on the last image by relying on the orange line to be vertical/straight. You could adjust the 2nd image by upping the contrast as it looks a bit flat right now. I love the blue fence very much and it is beautifully captured. Looking at the series overall though, I noticed there is a color theme going on with this series (the orange color scheme). If you remove the blue photo, it would be go together really well as a series but then I love the blue photo so much and don't want it gone. I'm conflicted here now. But great job overall! Keep it up!
The blue wood pieces capture is brilliant, I also like the asphalt pic. The capture of granular texture on both is both interesting and amazing.
ReplyDeleteHi Vincent. As we discussed earlier this week, I don't find your first (2) images all that successful. However the those are. The blue color is so beautiful and captivating in that one image you posted. As you process that image in particular be sure that the symmetry is "Spot On" as they say in England! It's so close as it is right now, but not perfect. For me your fourth image from the top is a better B&W photo and the last image needs more processing, as it just feel a bit dead or lack-luster, but it has something to work with, so don't give up on it, just experiment with how you are processing it. I would start with more contrast, a bit brighter and adjusting the clarity/texture. Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Vincent, also adjust the orientation on the last image by relying on the orange line to be vertical/straight. You could adjust the 2nd image by upping the contrast as it looks a bit flat right now. I love the blue fence very much and it is beautifully captured. Looking at the series overall though, I noticed there is a color theme going on with this series (the orange color scheme). If you remove the blue photo, it would be go together really well as a series but then I love the blue photo so much and don't want it gone. I'm conflicted here now. But great job overall! Keep it up!
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