I think the shadows on the third picture are very strong, which is a good thing. I also like that you made it a black and white photo. On the second picture you could maybe work out the light a little bit more, so that it is stronger. For me personally there is going on to much on the last picture, but I appreciate the different lines and use of light.
Hi Maryam. The images you've posted are strong. As Tessa mentions the last image is not the best and you should consider replacing that image with a new one. The other work really well together and the fact that they all contain a similar style of light and shadows really helps. You might want to consider a tighter crop on the fourth image posted, as it would fit into the group a bit better. Good Luck!
Hi Maryam, I agree with Andy. I think the second image needs more processing, perhaps increasing the exposure a little and adding in a little contrast. Also, adjust the orientation of the image to be more straight. It's a bit crooked. I think if you don't want to take away the last image, I suggest flipping the image upside down and making a B&W image to make it abstract. The rest of the image you have on here are quite enjoying to look at. Great work on them!
I think the shadows on the third picture are very strong, which is a good thing. I also like that you made it a black and white photo.
ReplyDeleteOn the second picture you could maybe work out the light a little bit more, so that it is stronger.
For me personally there is going on to much on the last picture, but I appreciate the different lines and use of light.
Hi Maryam. The images you've posted are strong. As Tessa mentions the last image is not the best and you should consider replacing that image with a new one. The other work really well together and the fact that they all contain a similar style of light and shadows really helps. You might want to consider a tighter crop on the fourth image posted, as it would fit into the group a bit better. Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Maryam, I agree with Andy. I think the second image needs more processing, perhaps increasing the exposure a little and adding in a little contrast. Also, adjust the orientation of the image to be more straight. It's a bit crooked. I think if you don't want to take away the last image, I suggest flipping the image upside down and making a B&W image to make it abstract. The rest of the image you have on here are quite enjoying to look at. Great work on them!
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