I really like the bench and light through the shed pictures. The bench has an interesting curve in one of the pieces of wood while the shed (if it is a shed) has a nice focus on one of the gaps. Great effort Tesa!
I really like the last photo. i do think it could be more effective in black and white. Focusing more on the lines of light making. I also would experiment more with the black and the darkness in the photo more.
I really love the last two pictures, I think they both have a great and beautiful feeling attached to them. The simplicity of the frame cut just on the bottom left edge is perfectly done and it gives the picture a sense of harmony, which I love. Also the last picture, the lighting is so fine and thin, but at the same time is so shiny and gives a great feeling of hopefulness. Keep it up with the great job! I think that if you keep shooting as you were doing with those two, you can make a great final project with the final 5 pictures. I think that, overall, the first 3 pictures have a completely different feeling than the last 2, at the end is up to you which way you wanna keep going, but I think that I you shoot with those two images in mind, you will nail this.
Hi Tessa. The last three images are your strongest of the group. I think all (5) could use better processing, but the simplicity of the last (3) are great. As it stands I don't think any of the ones you've posted are photographs that need to remain in color. In fact , I think they would all be better if they were B&W photos. Moving forward keep them simple! Good Luck!
Hi Tessa, I agree with Andy. The last 3 images are the strongest of the group because how difficult it is to identify the objects. I love them and I think they work well as a group. For the second image, I would suggest going back and photographing it again but this time, get more up-close with the goal of making the object (Chair) visually unrecognizable. You can achieve this by focusing more on the pattern lines of the wood and then editing it to black and white. Same goes for the first image of the bark of the tree. Get more up-close to photograph the textures. Increase the contrast a little bit of the last image if you choose to make it a B&W image. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to see what else you will be creating and be safe!
I really like the bench and light through the shed pictures. The bench has an interesting curve in one of the pieces of wood while the shed (if it is a shed) has a nice focus on one of the gaps. Great effort Tesa!
ReplyDeleteI really like the last photo. i do think it could be more effective in black and white. Focusing more on the lines of light making. I also would experiment more with the black and the darkness in the photo more.
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ReplyDeleteI really love the last two pictures, I think they both have a great and beautiful feeling attached to them. The simplicity of the frame cut just on the bottom left edge is perfectly done and it gives the picture a sense of harmony, which I love. Also the last picture, the lighting is so fine and thin, but at the same time is so shiny and gives a great feeling of hopefulness. Keep it up with the great job!
I think that if you keep shooting as you were doing with those two, you can make a great final project with the final 5 pictures. I think that, overall, the first 3 pictures have a completely different feeling than the last 2, at the end is up to you which way you wanna keep going, but I think that I you shoot with those two images in mind, you will nail this.
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Hi Tessa. The last three images are your strongest of the group. I think all (5) could use better processing, but the simplicity of the last (3) are great. As it stands I don't think any of the ones you've posted are photographs that need to remain in color. In fact , I think they would all be better if they were B&W photos. Moving forward keep them simple! Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Tessa, I agree with Andy. The last 3 images are the strongest of the group because how difficult it is to identify the objects. I love them and I think they work well as a group. For the second image, I would suggest going back and photographing it again but this time, get more up-close with the goal of making the object (Chair) visually unrecognizable. You can achieve this by focusing more on the pattern lines of the wood and then editing it to black and white. Same goes for the first image of the bark of the tree. Get more up-close to photograph the textures. Increase the contrast a little bit of the last image if you choose to make it a B&W image. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to see what else you will be creating and be safe!
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