You are using the lines very well, which is already giving your images an abstract touch. In the fourth picture the lines create a sort of dynamic which I really appreciate. It is very simple, but at the same time it is complex. I also like the second picture. You focus on the one line of the wood, but then there also the horizontal lines in the background. I think the triangle wood picture is not as successful because it seems more flat than the others.
I love the work that you are doing, your focus on lines and wood. I see that you are looking for that symmetry and balance on your pictures trying to match equally the overall of the image. I see a lot of balance and texture. I personally love texture and I think you are doing a great job at accomplishing that, if that is what you are looking for. Regarding the idea abstraction, I think that you are definitely on the right track, I would (if I were you) keep working on the perspectives that you use, which already seem great. But maybe looking at these materials and textures that you are using so much, from a different perspective, from below, closer up, or even during the edition part, would make your work even more successful.
Hi Neah. As others have already mentioned your use of lines is working very well, especially with the images that are simple. You have posted (2) images in color and I don't think either of those are strong color photographs, so I would recommend converting those to B&W. I would encourage you to continue photographing as time permits and continue to work in the direction you started here. As Tessa mentions above, be careful as you photograph a flatter space as your image won't have the depth that might be needed. Keep Up the Sold work. Good Luck!
Hi Neah, comparing the body of work you have here, I would suggest to you to take out the last image as it is under processed and doesn't fit in well with the rest of the work. I prefer the B&W triangle door/fence over the colored one. Also take out the vignette or decrease significantly. Looking at the 4th image, the little black line at the top left corner peeping in bothers me a little. I would suggest you adjust your photo to get rid of it. I also played around with how the image would look like if it was rotated. I personally found the rotated version even more interesting, that is having the right side of this photo as the top of the photo. Once you do that, you will notice that half of the photo looks lighter compared to the left. It creates some sort of balance in the work. These images overall are a solid body of work--Great job!
You are using the lines very well, which is already giving your images an abstract touch.
ReplyDeleteIn the fourth picture the lines create a sort of dynamic which I really appreciate. It is very simple, but at the same time it is complex.
I also like the second picture. You focus on the one line of the wood, but then there also the horizontal lines in the background.
I think the triangle wood picture is not as successful because it seems more flat than the others.
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ReplyDeleteI love the work that you are doing, your focus on lines and wood. I see that you are looking for that symmetry and balance on your pictures trying to match equally the overall of the image. I see a lot of balance and texture. I personally love texture and I think you are doing a great job at accomplishing that, if that is what you are looking for.
Regarding the idea abstraction, I think that you are definitely on the right track, I would (if I were you) keep working on the perspectives that you use, which already seem great. But maybe looking at these materials and textures that you are using so much, from a different perspective, from below, closer up, or even during the edition part, would make your work even more successful.
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Hi Neah. As others have already mentioned your use of lines is working very well, especially with the images that are simple. You have posted (2) images in color and I don't think either of those are strong color photographs, so I would recommend converting those to B&W. I would encourage you to continue photographing as time permits and continue to work in the direction you started here. As Tessa mentions above, be careful as you photograph a flatter space as your image won't have the depth that might be needed. Keep Up the Sold work. Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Neah, comparing the body of work you have here, I would suggest to you to take out the last image as it is under processed and doesn't fit in well with the rest of the work. I prefer the B&W triangle door/fence over the colored one. Also take out the vignette or decrease significantly. Looking at the 4th image, the little black line at the top left corner peeping in bothers me a little. I would suggest you adjust your photo to get rid of it. I also played around with how the image would look like if it was rotated. I personally found the rotated version even more interesting, that is having the right side of this photo as the top of the photo. Once you do that, you will notice that half of the photo looks lighter compared to the left. It creates some sort of balance in the work. These images overall are a solid body of work--Great job!
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