I think that the second picture would be more successful in black and white. I like the second morning picture. I think the contrast of your window with the blinds and the right side of the picture is nice. It might also work nicely in black and white and you could then change the colors of the shadows and lights to make it less black and white. I am not sure about your first food picture, as the object is taking up the whole image, not leaving space for anything else.
Hi Rachel, I like the last 4 images of this series. I am kind of fine with the 6th image not being B&W. If you do decide to make it B&W, I would advise you keep it as a neutral B&W image and not a variation of a B&W processing. The 7th image could use a bit of contrast but besides that, it looks good. And I like how you made it an abstract image. I see an opportunity with the 3rd image. Process it more into a B&W image and then work with the contrast, highlights, and exposure to help create more depth. Change the 2nd image to B&W. My least images might be the 1st and 4th image. I would suggest you try again on the 1st image and focus the camera on the dog instead of focusing inside. You could save the 4th image by turning it into a B&W image or just replacing it with something else. Good job overall and good luck!
Hi Rachel. The tissue box, the tissue box! OMG I love that moment and that light. More like that please. You images for Inside-Out are ok, but need an edge or a feeling. Keep messing around with those and see. They aren't bad, but they're no tissue box! The eating ones are also plain so perhaps showing some more space or something more visually interesting.
I think that the second picture would be more successful in black and white.
ReplyDeleteI like the second morning picture. I think the contrast of your window with the blinds and the right side of the picture is nice. It might also work nicely in black and white and you could then change the colors of the shadows and lights to make it less black and white.
I am not sure about your first food picture, as the object is taking up the whole image, not leaving space for anything else.
Hi Rachel, I like the last 4 images of this series. I am kind of fine with the 6th image not being B&W. If you do decide to make it B&W, I would advise you keep it as a neutral B&W image and not a variation of a B&W processing. The 7th image could use a bit of contrast but besides that, it looks good. And I like how you made it an abstract image. I see an opportunity with the 3rd image. Process it more into a B&W image and then work with the contrast, highlights, and exposure to help create more depth. Change the 2nd image to B&W. My least images might be the 1st and 4th image. I would suggest you try again on the 1st image and focus the camera on the dog instead of focusing inside. You could save the 4th image by turning it into a B&W image or just replacing it with something else. Good job overall and good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Rachel. The tissue box, the tissue box! OMG I love that moment and that light. More like that please. You images for Inside-Out are ok, but need an edge or a feeling. Keep messing around with those and see. They aren't bad, but they're no tissue box! The eating ones are also plain so perhaps showing some more space or something more visually interesting.
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