I love love love love so much the colors and texture that you are using throughout your pictures. It is just delighting to look at, and it is extremely pleasing. Your first 4 pictures are just amazing, utilizing not only the human body focusing on some particulars parts, but also objects representing one's personality, creating them part of one's self. I would just try to work on the last two pictures, they are too similar and it seems repetitive. I am sure that you can definitively use this time to explore more and create some great pictures that go along with the first 4.
The Portrait photos are really clean. I do think the last photo of you is a little dark,I believe that photo definitely stand out more if we could see more of your face. But i can also see if that was an artistic choice. The last two photos seem out of place, with a portrait photos being so clean and sharp it just seems like it's a pile of stuff. I the view were could not feel the significance of photographing those items.
The first four pictures are more than amazing I liked how neat they are in the smallest details from the reflection of the girl on the table to half of your face is shaded. And I agree with Tomas with the last two pictures I liked the idea of it but I think you can Shoot better pictures that can match the beautiful portrait photos you did. Great job Vincent keep it up.
Hi Vincent, I agree with most of the comments on here. All of these portraits are good. Decrease the contrast on the 3rd image a bit to get more subtle info from the photo. The fourth image is good as it is. Maybe just increase the highlight/decrease the contrast to get more information as well. For the last 2 images, I would replace them as I think they are not quite well executed as the other photos. Shoot more focusing on the portraits of stuff and playing with the use of light. Good luck!
Hi Vincent. I think in general all the images need more processing. I do very much like the simplicity of the portraits of the young woman, as well as the light. The self-portraits are too basic with no complexity. Try using reflections, shadows or some other way to represent yourself and dig a bit deeper. Remember these images need to be more than what you look like. As for the last two, they are in the direction of the assignment, but they are not interesting or well executed photographs. I would suggest continuing to photograph for all three challenges. Good Luck! Andy
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ReplyDeleteI love love love love so much the colors and texture that you are using throughout your pictures. It is just delighting to look at, and it is extremely pleasing. Your first 4 pictures are just amazing, utilizing not only the human body focusing on some particulars parts, but also objects representing one's personality, creating them part of one's self. I would just try to work on the last two pictures, they are too similar and it seems repetitive. I am sure that you can definitively use this time to explore more and create some great pictures that go along with the first 4.
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The Portrait photos are really clean. I do think the last photo of you is a little dark,I believe that photo definitely stand out more if we could see more of your face. But i can also see if that was an artistic choice. The last two photos seem out of place, with a portrait photos being so clean and sharp it just seems like it's a pile of stuff. I the view were could not feel the significance of photographing those items.
ReplyDeleteThe first four pictures are more than amazing I liked how neat they are in the smallest details from the reflection of the girl on the table to half of your face is shaded. And I agree with Tomas with the last two pictures I liked the idea of it but I think you can Shoot better pictures that can match the beautiful portrait photos you did. Great job Vincent keep it up.
ReplyDeleteHi Vincent, I agree with most of the comments on here. All of these portraits are good. Decrease the contrast on the 3rd image a bit to get more subtle info from the photo. The fourth image is good as it is. Maybe just increase the highlight/decrease the contrast to get more information as well. For the last 2 images, I would replace them as I think they are not quite well executed as the other photos. Shoot more focusing on the portraits of stuff and playing with the use of light. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Vincent. I think in general all the images need more processing. I do very much like the simplicity of the portraits of the young woman, as well as the light. The self-portraits are too basic with no complexity. Try using reflections, shadows or some other way to represent yourself and dig a bit deeper. Remember these images need to be more than what you look like. As for the last two, they are in the direction of the assignment, but they are not interesting or well executed photographs. I would suggest continuing to photograph for all three challenges. Good Luck! Andy
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