I love the work that you have done for this assignment, particularly the second and last image. I feel that the way you portrayed the first two images, fulfilling perfectly the challenge of that particular series of portraits is just amazing. I would only try to figure out a way to choose some pictures that you like and try to make the 6 pictures work together as a whole.
Hi Neah, I quite enjoy these series and love the processing on these. If I would change anything, it'd most likely be the second image. I think it might be too simple. I would challenge to take more photos to swap it out. I would also replace the 4th image. It doesn't match the level of quality work as I have seen here. Also, maybe change out the cat photo. though I like the processing somehow. I'm a bit conflicted on that one. Try the photo in B&W. I think that might be way better. I would say overall, keep taking more photos to have more options. Good luck!
Hi Neah. I freaking LOVE the second image! The darkness, the colors, the objects, the texture! The MOOD! Yes the mood. Continue to try to make these kinds of photographs. Here you are giving us subject, but not so much that it gives everything away. I think the others are ok. I don't think the one titled "Always taking notes" nor the cat are particularly successful and I think more engagement of the subject would help a lot. Good Luck! Andy
Always Taking Note 
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ReplyDeleteI love the work that you have done for this assignment, particularly the second and last image. I feel that the way you portrayed the first two images, fulfilling perfectly the challenge of that particular series of portraits is just amazing. I would only try to figure out a way to choose some pictures that you like and try to make the 6 pictures work together as a whole.
Keep up the great job.
Hi Neah, I quite enjoy these series and love the processing on these. If I would change anything, it'd most likely be the second image. I think it might be too simple. I would challenge to take more photos to swap it out. I would also replace the 4th image. It doesn't match the level of quality work as I have seen here. Also, maybe change out the cat photo. though I like the processing somehow. I'm a bit conflicted on that one. Try the photo in B&W. I think that might be way better. I would say overall, keep taking more photos to have more options. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Neah. I freaking LOVE the second image! The darkness, the colors, the objects, the texture! The MOOD! Yes the mood. Continue to try to make these kinds of photographs. Here you are giving us subject, but not so much that it gives everything away. I think the others are ok. I don't think the one titled "Always taking notes" nor the cat are particularly successful and I think more engagement of the subject would help a lot. Good Luck! Andy
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