Hi Maryam, these are very good. I love all of these except for maybe the last image. I would swap it out for a different images instead. I feel like the 4th image would be better in B&W. I really enjoy your use of light and cropping and some of the obscureness you have with your images. Keep it up and good luck!
Hi Maryam. In your first two images, keep away from the act of doing something. In other words, these are not images about documenting and event. While your daughter can be holding a camera and your son getting his haircut, don't photograph the act of! Instead, interrupt the action and create a portrait with eye contact. Your self-portraits are much better and you use the space in a way that they have more depth. Continue making these types of self-portraits. For the last three, the ironing board is the one that works. The others don't really make sense as a portrait, although I do know why you think they would. Continue photographing for that challenge as well and keep in mind that regardless of the subject, they need to be visually interesting. Good luck! Andy
Hi Maryam, these are very good. I love all of these except for maybe the last image. I would swap it out for a different images instead. I feel like the 4th image would be better in B&W. I really enjoy your use of light and cropping and some of the obscureness you have with your images. Keep it up and good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Maryam. In your first two images, keep away from the act of doing something. In other words, these are not images about documenting and event. While your daughter can be holding a camera and your son getting his haircut, don't photograph the act of! Instead, interrupt the action and create a portrait with eye contact. Your self-portraits are much better and you use the space in a way that they have more depth. Continue making these types of self-portraits. For the last three, the ironing board is the one that works. The others don't really make sense as a portrait, although I do know why you think they would. Continue photographing for that challenge as well and keep in mind that regardless of the subject, they need to be visually interesting. Good luck! Andy
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