I really like your "Almost Black" images. I think that they are very successful. Especially the second one has this nice structure to it with some nice lines. For me the gray pictures are a bit too gray, but that might just be personal preference. For the white pictures I think that the one with the tree is the least successful of the three. It is kind of plain compared to the other two that you have. All in all, I think you did a really good job.
I really enjoy your almost black images as well. I think both your spiderweb pictures are very cool and interesting to look at. Like Tessa said the grey one feel a little too washed out and too grey. I do think you are successful with choosing some good subjects for each of the three categories. Keep up the great work.
Hi Maryam, I like the first 3 images. Good job on those! I am not sure about the 4th image. I can't tell what the message is here/metaphor here is. The 5th image is repetitive with the first image so replace that. I like the last 2 images though. Good job and good luck!
Hi Maryam. I think you are doing a great job! I agree with the others. If you can crop image 2 differently it might help. Perhaps crop off the left side so the highlights become more active. Replace image 3, sadly it is just boring and doesn't have a lot of content. The others are great! Good Luck!
I really like your "Almost Black" images. I think that they are very successful. Especially the second one has this nice structure to it with some nice lines. For me the gray pictures are a bit too gray, but that might just be personal preference. For the white pictures I think that the one with the tree is the least successful of the three. It is kind of plain compared to the other two that you have. All in all, I think you did a really good job.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy your almost black images as well. I think both your spiderweb pictures are very cool and interesting to look at. Like Tessa said the grey one feel a little too washed out and too grey. I do think you are successful with choosing some good subjects for each of the three categories. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Maryam, I like the first 3 images. Good job on those! I am not sure about the 4th image. I can't tell what the message is here/metaphor here is. The 5th image is repetitive with the first image so replace that. I like the last 2 images though. Good job and good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Maryam. I think you are doing a great job! I agree with the others. If you can crop image 2 differently it might help. Perhaps crop off the left side so the highlights become more active. Replace image 3, sadly it is just boring and doesn't have a lot of content. The others are great! Good Luck!
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